Saturday, April 23, 2011

"till cool nightfall"   [villanelle]



The work-week draws to a close
with the radio's violin
time's river seemingly flows

its origin no one knows?
tell me how did it all begin!
the work-week draws to a close

a semblance of order grows
if you're sitting with with thumb on chin
time's river seemingly flows

should poets mention the rose
would an answer open up then?
the work-week draws to a close

this world is real   we suppose
but what do we contend to win?
time's river seemingly flows

such hubbub yet onward goes
till cool nightfall quiets the din
the work-week draws to a close
time's river seemingly flows

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