Thursday, August 28, 2008
ghazal: "the full price"
The full price you exact is precise though it takes a long time
truth will triumph by twirling the dice though it takes a long time
the conditions for learning are everywhere all is our school
we've been studying fire and ice though it takes a long time
the belovèd is hidden her veil is beauty's caprice
one could make the whole film with no splice though it takes a long time
fine cuisine thrives on contrast the sour's in need of the sweet
you could cook with mere sunlight and rice though it takes a long time
if the yarn be a fiction the dream it spins out yet enchants
worlds emerge and subside in a trice though it takes a long time
if we're fighting let's fight from the heart love is dark as a sea
hold your fire till glimpsing white eyes though it takes a long time
I don't know about oceans but pearls come from somewhere perchance
pearl-like tears grow pelagic in price though it takes a long time
what I glimpse of you though a mere hint brings my rash heart delight
I grow bold to unmask your disguise though it takes a long time
I desired a story to lull me and ease obscure pain
you obliged with a cosmic device though it takes a long time
our surrender to you was ordained from the very first dawn
each dusk moves a small turn of the vice though it takes a long time
could it be you're the one I was waiting for? life is absurd
there's a twist to the meshwork of sighs though it takes a long time
every curving design's a mark of her smiling blinkers
we'll be blindsided by her white thighs though it takes a long time
such autumnal thoughts! curtains descend at the end of each act
spring's implied floral answers arise though it takes a long time
won't the candle proves useless unless you've a pocketed match?
there's a singular curl when flame dies though it takes a long time
the value of things peters out what we cherish eludes us
our confusion encounters demise though it takes a long time
I was born ululating my cry is a sign of my life
others weep when this minstrelsy dies though it takes a long time
tone the volume down speak in a whisper if meanings are real
those who listen acknowledge truth's size though it takes a long time
every spark you confided me proved different from what I'd supposed!
such discursive truths spring from bald lies though it takes a long time
every verse of my ghazal each couplet I string pierces veils
love's the burden song bears in reprise though it takes a long time
our hellos are unending! I greet you again and again
we'll endure the assault of goodbyes though it takes a long time
in his poetry Raphael dabbles provoking deep thoughts
shallow critics admit it's half nice though it takes a long time
[this is not yet the final version]
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2 comments:
Another beautiful attempt David. Please check my blog for an 'award' you have been given: www.penmaiden.com
Pragya
Many thanks Pragya :-) -- will check. This ghazal as it appears right now isn't quite finalized -- I've added to it on paper (will likely be blogged over the weekend).
cheers,
d.i.
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