Life itself comprises the greatest castigation
in view of what crime no belated information!
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I've been divvied & diced into so many portions
which part is for myself I find no indication!
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Whereas truth qua truth allows no variation
a lie is so docile knowing no such limitation!
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No matter if you frame it in silver or in gold
a mirror's a mirror holding no confabulation!
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Life itself comprises the greatest castigation
in view of what crime no belated information!
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Zindagi say badi saza hi nahin,
Aur kya jurm hai pata hi nahin!
Itnay hison mein bat gaya hoon main,
Meray hisay mein kuch bacha hi nahin!
Sach ghatay ya badey to sach na rahey,
Jhooth ki koi intehaa hi nahin!
Jad do chaandi mein chahey sonay mein,
Aaiana jhooth bolta hi nahin!
Zindagi say badi saza hi nahin,
Aur kya jurm hai pata hi nahin!
- Krishan Bihari `Noor'
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With thanks to Max Babi for his rendering ("transcreation"), which allowed my own riff on same.
2 comments:
That's pretty good DRI.
You seem to have preserved the original flavour very well while lending the ghazal new garbs.
Wonderful.
Thanks.
Max
Thousand thanks, Max!
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